I came to ask you to go out,,” she said, to strike up a conversation
Where to?” I asked.
“Sei–la, a bar?” she asked excitedly.
I don’t know….
“You never want to go out with me,” she dramatizes. “You would do that if you were that with old man,” she says, making me look at her disapprovingly.
“I never liked going out, you know. But today I’m going.” I say and she jumps for joy.
I got up with Olivia and we went into the house. Will was talking on his cell phone and didn’t even see us. I thanked him for that and we went up to my room.
Im going to take a shower,” I said.
Olivia nodded and I went to take a shower so we could leave.
Anyway, I was ready
I put on a short black dress and boots, covered it with a jacket, and took out my cell phone.
We went downstairs laughing at something silly Olivia said, without realizing that Will and my brother were in the living room.
“Where are you going?” 1 heard that thick voice that made me freese.
“We don’t owe you any satisfaction, no.” Olivia replied harshly: “Are you her father?” she asked debauchedly.
I watched Will turned with anger. He was furious.
“He’s not
is not her father, but she’s under his care. As long as she’s here, you have to answer to him,” replied Brian, standing up and also furious,
“You don’t even know how much he loves her,” Olivia grumbled and I pinched her. She was angry. “Ouch!” she muttered.
“What did you say?” Brian asked.
“Nothing. We’re going to a bar.” I answer quickly before she says anything else.
“Your not going” says Will firmly, without looking at me.
“How?” I ask
simple, you’re not going.” He repeated. I looked at him in disbelief and with one certainty. I hate taking orders.
“I’m going,” I spoke firmly and now he was facing me. “My parents have never stopped me from going out, and you’re not going to be the one to do it. We’ll be back early.” I finished walking down the stakes.
Will laughed and rodded. He wants to kill me, I know it
Bye,” I said, leaving the house without giving him or Brian a chance to say anything
Olivia started laughing wildly and I wanted to slap her.
“What’s wrong with you?” I asked angrily, “Saying those things to Brian…
“Tim sorry, she l
he begged, “I couldn’t control myself when I saw I’d already spoken.”
“I think you better learn to control yourself because if someone finds out something through you, I will never forgive you“, I wan
+
She don’t like Will, that’s fine. I don’t accept her trying to hurt us with a silly insinuation.
warned.
I hate taking orders..
“I promise I’ll control myself,” she says, fiddling with her cell phone, “our ride is here,’ she points to a black car parked across the street
I nod and we head towards the car, where two men I didn’t know
with him.
w were standing. One of them was Olivia’s date and the other I’m sure called to try and set me up
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mat really confusing when Julia entered the scene? it got really jumpy
and Grammer
or was
way different
POST COMME
My Father’s Best Frend
Statement.
POY WILLIAM
She is a disaster, a walking disaster. A girl seeking shelter and I would do anything to be her shelter. She has such a mysterious look. Every detail of her overflows me, I don’t think anyone has ever loved her like she deserves, they have always given her crumbs. But I am here, willing and ready to overflow her if she allows me to color this dark soul with my love.
Most things that happen in my life, I know how I’m feeling. But when I was with her for the first time, in that bathroom, at that party, I didn’t know what happened. I can’t define the avalanche of feelings and sensations she causes me. She brought me the certainty that I knew nothing about love until I met her and that it was better, much better, when she arrived unannounced and showed me all the good things of an unexpected feeling, the benefits of diving in for good and not realizing that you are drowning in passion, and even dying forever, enjoying living by her side,
I tried to feign indifference, but the truth is that I was eating myself up inside secing Julia leaving so beautifully with her friend Olivia. A friend who seems to hate ne. I don’t know if she knows about us, but if she doesn’t, she’s suspicious and she certainly doesn’t like it at all..
“They left in a black car with two men,”
“Brian said nervously. He was watching the girls through the living room
window.
I swallow my salive with difficulty and try not to go crazy. I can’t show any kind of lack of control around Brian or he might suspect something
I ignored him and went to my wine House to get a glass and some whiskey. I poured my glass, downing it once and refilling it.
“Did you hear what I said?” Brian catches my eye.
“I heard,” I try to sound nonchalant.
Julia is under your supervision, if anything happens to her, my father will kill you,” He points at me.
“We cant lock your sister in the house,” I said, trying to forget for a moment that she had come out looking very pretty in that black dress.
“My dad wouldn’t judge you if we brought her into the house by her hair.” He said.
“You are jealous of your sister,” I laughed at the face he made.
“She’s insufferable. I can’t stand her. But she’s my little sister. I don’t want any guy to hurt her,” He said sincerely. I could film it and show it to Julia, which was the most Brian would tell her.
Lagreed
I took out my cell phone and texted her asking where she was. She replied quickly saying she wanted to have fun today,
“Which bar are she they at?” I asked if he was interested.
“I don’t know. But I know of a very trendly one in town, I’m sure they went there.”
“Okay. Let’s go get her,” I said, sipping the rest of the whiskey in my glass.
Brian smiled excitedly and stood up.
I stood up too, placing my glass on the counter and grabbing my car keys.
Brian explained to me correctly where this bar was and we went to it. As expected, it was crowded. Drunk young people everywhere.
“You go fled Olivia and I go find Julia,” I say as I get out of the car. Brian nodded and we walked into the middle of those people. Same women were throwing themselves at me and I looked for Julia with my gaze.
I found her sitting on the bench talking to a man. He had his hand on her leg and was saying something in her ear, I felt my blood boil when he kissed her cheek,
Today I kill
I ran out to the two of them pushing everyone who came in front of me. I was blind with rage. I grabbed Julia by the arm pulling her away from that man.
“Hey,” she complained. She was drunk.
What’s up, and The man asked, getting up and facing me. “Oh, no, you’re her father,” He says ungraciously.
Scatenent
I let go of Julissa and punched that bastard in the face. I don’t know why, but it made me even angrier.
“Will,” Julia yelled trying to hold me back. I let go of the arm she was holding and threw another, another.
- r. and another, a string of punches at that man.
He was already limp under me and I couldn’t stop hitting him. I felt myself being pulled back and about 6 men were holding me down, including Brian
“Enough,” he said panting.
I looked around and everyone was looking at us scared, I faced Julia who had her eyes full of tears and I started walking to leave this damn bar
“What’s wrong with you? Olivia screamed after me, I was about to tell her to fuck off
If she hadn’t gone to my house and invited Julia to this bar, none of this would have happened.
“You’re my problems,” I turned to face her, pointing my finger in her face. She backed away scared and I tried to calm down, “If you hadn’t called Julia out on this shit, none of this would have happened!”
“Julia is a young girl and she needs to go out, and meet new people. If you’re old and not going, it’s not my problem,” She said, turning to me.
“She’s in my care, and as long as she’s in my house, she’s not going out with you!” I yelled.
“Calm down,” Julia said, standing in front of me, I looked at her stemly, who looked away, I was furious and didn’t even understand what all the fuss was
“Is that it?” Olivia asked looking at me, confirming my doubt from before, she knew about me and Julia,
“Olivia,” Julia warned her friend
“Let’s go!” Brian ordered getting into the car.
I took one last look at the two girls and got into my car waiting for them to get in.
They got in, and Olivia, as usual, complained.
“Olivia, if you don’t want to leave, you can stay. I came to pick up Julia, not you,” I said without patience.
“You’re not starting again,” Julia ordered before her friend could say anything, “let’s pol
I shook my head and started the car heading back to my house where I shouldn’t have left
about.
“Your hand is hurt,” Julia says walking into my room.
We arrived home some time ago, I didn’t want to have a conversation with anyone, so as soon as I arrived 1 came straight to my room.
“I want to be alone.”
“What happened to make you look like that? She asked approaching and sitting next to me on the bed.
That was the problem. I don’t know, I felt a hatred I had never felt before at the sight of that man touching her. Was it jealousy?
“I don’t know…” I got up closed the door with the key and sat back on the bed. I don’t know what’s going on with me. I’m having some attitudes that I don’t recognize myself, you know?”
“Were you jealous?” She asked. “I can’t believe you’re jealous of me,” she said, shocked.
“Do you want to know the truth? I like you! It’s as simple as that. I can’t make like, I can’t pretend I don’t. I can’t put it off until later. I don’t work well with these games. 1 still believe that if it’s mutual, you’ll enjoy bearing everything 1 have to say. If it’s mutual, you won’t be scared or want to distance yourself. If it’s true, you’ll smile and feel special. And that’s exactly how I want you to feel. This thing of not showing, of taking time to respond, of going slowly, of hiding feelings. that’s not for me, just as I can’t fake sympathy, I don’t see why I should hide my feelings. I like you, YES, and you should know that right away. That way, we save time and avoid wear and tear. So, we stay together at once or we each go our separate ways. I much prefer a sincere no than that boring blah blah blah of someone who doesnt know what they want in life. And I’m also dismissing this story of keeping Tittle schemes everywhere to fill the need and push everything with the belly while the perfect person does not appear. No, you know what? I like you. I know it’s early. I know it might not last forever. I know you must have a lot of flaws, just like I have mine. I know things change, but that’s what I’m feeling right now. I know it’s something forbidden… In my opinion, confessing a feeling is not n mistake of the one who says it, but of the one who does not know how to receive it. You more than anyone know that I have never been as interested in someone as I am in you
My Father’s Best Frend
I’m going to punish you.
POV JUTJA
I was completely in shock, taken aback by Will’s statement.
Oh my God, he declared himself
I was speechless and my only reaction was to jump into his lap and kiss him. I moved in his lap and he squeezed my waist tightly.
“Do you know what I’m going to do with you?” He asked between the kisses.
“What?” I ask øigitly.
William gets up with me on his lap and throws me on the bed with violence.
“I show you that I’m not a brat and that I hate being contradicted. Besides, you deserve very severe punishment for talking to that son of a bitch at the har,” He spoke with a threatening tone which heightened my anticipation. His eyes were dark and he was watching me, maybe thinking about what to do with me.
I leaned on my elbows to face him, focused on his eyes without looking away.
“Lie down straight,” he ordered and 1, of course, didn’t obey, making him laugh, deny with his head, and give me a gentle push, making my back hit the bed. “Take off your clothes!” he ordered.
“What if I don’t? I teased.
“You asked,” He spoke and I didn’t understand until he approached me and ripped my clothes. He ripped my dress. Should I be angry? Yes, I should have been. But something inside me had ignited.
William kept analyzing my body for a few minutes and then ran his hand over it. He started at my neck, went down to my shoulders, and stopped at my breasts giving special attention there, he played with the nipple of my chest, and I gasped when he gave a light pinch. He ran his hands down my belly, past my groin, and completely ignored my intimacy that already craved his touch. He moved down to my legs and finally my feet.
He looked at me like I was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen in his life. This look of his made me hot and wanting very much his touches, his kisses.
“You are a work of an,” He said looking at me intensely.
“Will…” I said harassed.
“I’m going to punish you a lot,” he muttered and knelt beside the bed, kissing my feet. He kissed his way up my legs, all over my body, ignoring my intimacy again.
“I want you to touch me,” I asked.
“I’m already touching you,” he said cynically
“Not where I want to,” I said breathlessly
“Tell me, where do you want me to touch you?” he asked, looking me in the eye.
I took his
is hand, which was resting on the bed, and led it to my intimate area. He smiled mischievously and nodded,
*I don’t know if you de
deserve it,” he said, laughing:
course I deserve it! I want you so much,” I said, holding on tightly to his arm. I think I’m going to have an ergases just looking at him.
Will focused again on my body and was now placing his fingers on my private parts, just above my panties, and I could feel my private parts his finger through my vagina and 1 tried to move, which made him stop his movements.
*If you keep moving. Ell stop, he warned, holding me seriously by the waist.
throbbing. He passed
I snorted but quickly agreed.
wat un anxious to know what he would do t
to me
am ran his index finger my already soaked panties.
Tm going to punish you
The barely touched you and you’re already all wet for me.”
He pulled my panties tight, ripping them open. Without warning, he put a finger inside me, wiggling it brutally. I wanted to scream with pleasure. He put in a second and a third finger, wiggling them hard.
“OH!” Limoined out lol.
a me with his dagers,
With one of his free hands, Will covered my mouth and continued to penetrate me
He looked into my eyes as he penetrated me hard
I was about to have the best orgasms of my life when he stopped and refused.
“Did I let you have an orgasm?” he asked and I denied it. He asked and I denied it. “If you do, I’ll punish you even more,” He warned.
“Will,” I whined, “I need this.““”
He denied it and went back to torturing me, showing his fingers deep inside me, and covering my mouth so that I wouldn’t scream or moan too loudly.
I couldn’t help myself and came apart on his fingers. I had the best orgasm of my entire life. The most tense and delicious of all
“Daughter a bitch,” he slapped my throbbing pussy hard, “Did 1 fucking tell you to cum?”
I’m going crazy, but I liked this William.
Fuck me good, love,” I ordered.
He asked rudely.
William looked at me surprised that I had called him love, which I had never done before. But I’m numb with pleasure and I need more.
He didn’t say anything, just sat on the bed and pulled me onto his lap. He laid me on his lap and smoothed my back and ass.
Before I could think, I felt a pain in my ass. He slapped me.
William smoothed my ass again and then slapped me again
This scene repeated itself several times, and I couldn’t keep up. My buttocks were throbbing and I was sure I was going to turn very red.
“Who the hell is in charge?” He asked and I denied it, remaining silent.
Another slap.
“Who the hell is in charge? He asked and I stayed the same.
Another harder slap.
Tm going to ask you one more time and I hope you’ll te
tell me what I want to hear,” He said, looking me in the eye: “Who is responsible for this?” He asked.
“You,” I said breathlenly. He smiled smugly.
“Are you
going to let another man touch you?” He asked and I shook my hend
Another slap.
“I didn’t hear you
you, answer me.” He ordered.
God, why do I like that? –
“No,” I answered
“No, what?” he asked, patting my throbbing ass
“I don’t let any man touch me,” I said quickly and he